One-sit rewrite

Hey,

Your landing page needs a rewrite. You've been putting it off for months.

Here's how to fix it in 45 minutes flat.

The rules:

• Set a timer for 45 minutes

• Screen record the entire session

• Zero research allowed (use what's in your head)

• Write like you're explaining to a friend at a bar

0-10 minutes: Gut the page 

Copy everything to a doc. Delete all the corporate fluff. Keep only what makes you money.

10-25 minutes: Rewrite the hero 

New headline (8 words max) New subhead (one sentence) New CTA (exactly what happens next)

25-35 minutes: Add three proofs 

Best testimonial quote Strongest stat Most obvious objection + your answer

35-45 minutes: Polish the flow 

Read out loud Fix anything that sounds like a robot Make sure grandma would understand

This works because constraints breed clarity. Unlimited time creates unlimited confusion.

You already know what converts. The customer objections. The winning messages. They're all in your head. The timer forces them out.

Hope this helped!

— Blake

My offers:

1. 60-min strategy call: Get strategic about your website, content, audience building, and conversion.

2. Landing page roast: 20-min video audit and written doc full of recommendations guaranteed to increase conversions.

3. Pagetear: Onboard me as your full-time copywriter to get major projects delivered every 48-72 hours.