Your landing page has a trust issue

Hey,

Most landing pages scream from the top:

→ “Book a demo”
→ “Try it free”
→ “See why 10,000+ teams love us”

All good eventually. But tough immediately.

Why?

Because the top of your page isn’t where you sell. It’s where you earn the right to sell.

Put it this way:

What you want is above the fold.
What they want is below it.

That’s the disconnect.

Buyers land on your page thinking:

• What the hell is this?

• Is it for someone like me?

• Can I trust what I’m seeing?

If they don’t get those answers in 5 seconds, they’re gone.

Here’s how to fix it:

1. Nail your first line

Your first sentence should prove you understand their world better than they do.

2. Lead with relevance, not reach

Nobody cares that 10,000 companies use you. They care if you work for companies like theirs.

3. Soften the CTA

Make it more manageable for them to take action on something right away.

The fold isn’t a billboard. It’s a handshake.

Once they feel understood, they’ll read the rest.

—Blake

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For any client you bring me to Pagetear that converts, you get 10%. And yep, it applies to recurring revenue for as long as the client stays on board.

Plans range from $2500/m - $5000/m, so every client you refer earns you an extra $250-$500 monthly.

Just make any intros via email and I’ll tackle the rest!